I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi my name is Zakaia and I like you had the colours in the background this is really helpful for people with allergies and other people in general. cool post.
Hi Zion Im Calais from paroa school and I like your post about allergy's I have allergy and have to get a test and I think it is great how you did it but you should of made the background lighter
Hi Zion, I'm Lucy from Paroa School. This blog post is really cool, the bright colours make you look at it. Do you have any of these allergies? I don't but I have an allergy to clover and dandelion. To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could make the colours duller so you look at the words rather than the background. Lucy
Hi my name is Jacob. I like how you added a lot of facts and put some colours in the background. Maybe next change the font to something cooler.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Zakaia and I like you had the colours in the background this is really helpful for people with allergies and other people in general. cool post.
ReplyDeleteHi Zion Im Calais from paroa school and I like your post about allergy's I have allergy and have to get a test and I think it is great how you did it but you should of made the background lighter
ReplyDeleteByee Calais
thank you for the comments and sorry about the background too I do not have good sense with colours much😅
ReplyDeleteHi Zion, I'm Lucy from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is really cool, the bright colours make you look at it. Do you have any of these allergies? I don't but I have an allergy to clover and dandelion. To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could make the colours duller so you look at the words rather than the background.
Lucy