I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Zion, Max from Paroa School here. This sounds like it would be a really good job. I'd work there too if I got free Ice cream. Maybe next time you could add a caption so people know what you're doing.
hey Zion Mack here from paroa school, i like post about wanting to work at McDonalds and how you laid it out, next time you could add more and fix your spelling. cya :b
Even though I liked this post and thought it was quite funny I must inform you that McDonalds might not be the best job to get if you were thinking on saving up or giving your Mother money to buy a house.
You did a good job at the background and I like how you layed out the post, but I don't think Ronald McDonald visits or goes to any McDonalds restaurants.
Why did you choose McDonalds over any other job? Keep up the quality posts, Carter.
Hey Zion, I'm Bella from Paroa School. I really enjoyed reading this and I thought it was very funny. The free ice cream sounds like a great plan!! Do you eat McDonalds much? Maybe next time you could add a bigger caption so we know why you are writing this. But otherwise I think it is very good. Hope you have a good day. Bella
ok ty for the comments and thanks i like making people laugh and i agree it's not the best job for that much money but I'll just start from a little job until I get better at working and Sorry about not adding more caption and that but I will try to do better :)
this quite funny and this is quite cool
ReplyDeleteHi Zion, Max from Paroa School here.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like it would be a really good job. I'd work there too if I got free Ice cream. Maybe next time you could add a caption so people know what you're doing.
hey Zion Mack here from paroa school, i like post about wanting to work at McDonalds and how you laid it out, next time you could add more and fix your spelling. cya :b
ReplyDeleteHey Zion, Carter from Paroa School here.
ReplyDeleteEven though I liked this post and thought it was quite funny I must inform you that McDonalds might not be the best job to get if you were thinking on saving up or giving your Mother money to buy a house.
You did a good job at the background and I like how you layed out the post, but I don't think Ronald McDonald visits or goes to any McDonalds restaurants.
Why did you choose McDonalds over any other job?
Keep up the quality posts,
Carter.
Good job i like the mc dolnalds logo
ReplyDeleteHey Zion, I'm Bella from Paroa School. I really enjoyed reading this and I thought it was very funny. The free ice cream sounds like a great plan!! Do you eat McDonalds much? Maybe next time you could add a bigger caption so we know why you are writing this. But otherwise I think it is very good.
ReplyDeleteHope you have a good day.
Bella
I would love to go to MC Dolnalds
ReplyDeleteHI Zion I like your work because it has a lot of info about McDonald's.
ReplyDeleteHi Zion I love this post
ReplyDeletehi my name is lachlan and I like what you have done but... you forgot your capshon. and next time maby try to explane more about your protege.
ReplyDeleteok ty for the comments and thanks i like making people laugh and i agree it's not the best job for that much money but I'll just start from a little job until I get better at working and Sorry about not adding more caption and that but I will try to do better :)
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